Redd Lyrus the Loner
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Redd Lyrus the Loner
Profile
Name: Redd
Gender: Female.
Age (use human years): 16.
Rank: N/A.
Personality: Redd is a stubborn angel. She does not want to give in and lose, as she wants to be the best. If she is near a stranger, she will get very hard and cold to anyone she does not know. But she is truly loyal and kind to her real friends. Redd has a slight temper, along with her stubbornness.
Likes: Flying, being alone, being in nature.
Dislikes: Being pestered, being followed, losing.
Fears: Being trapped and failing something.
Appearance:
Height: 6'.
Weight: 105 pounds.
Hair Color: Stunning red.
Eye Color: Grey.
Wing Color: White
Wing Aurora Color: Red
Items (e.g. jewelry): A pendant/necklace with a red wolf.
Family
Parents: Unknown but dead
Siblings: Unknown but dead
Boyfriend/Girlfriend/Husband/Wife (optional): N/A, now
Children (optional): N/A
Fighting
Style: Quick blows
Weapon/s: Magic, daggers and a sword.
Strengths: Very fast and silent, fighting in the dark
Weaknesses: Someone very strong, someone that knows her well.
Powers:
All magic but water, and turning into a red wolf
Name: Redd
Gender: Female.
Age (use human years): 16.
Rank: N/A.
Personality: Redd is a stubborn angel. She does not want to give in and lose, as she wants to be the best. If she is near a stranger, she will get very hard and cold to anyone she does not know. But she is truly loyal and kind to her real friends. Redd has a slight temper, along with her stubbornness.
Likes: Flying, being alone, being in nature.
Dislikes: Being pestered, being followed, losing.
Fears: Being trapped and failing something.
Appearance:
Height: 6'.
Weight: 105 pounds.
Hair Color: Stunning red.
Eye Color: Grey.
Wing Color: White
Wing Aurora Color: Red
Items (e.g. jewelry): A pendant/necklace with a red wolf.
Family
Parents: Unknown but dead
Siblings: Unknown but dead
Boyfriend/Girlfriend/Husband/Wife (optional): N/A, now
Children (optional): N/A
Fighting
Style: Quick blows
Weapon/s: Magic, daggers and a sword.
Strengths: Very fast and silent, fighting in the dark
Weaknesses: Someone very strong, someone that knows her well.
Powers:
All magic but water, and turning into a red wolf
Last edited by Redd on Tue Jun 09, 2015 5:11 pm; edited 2 times in total
Redd- Rank : Loner.
Lover : N/A, yet.
Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-06-09
Age : 24
Location : Alone.
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
Okay, a couple of things.
One: You cannot have every type of magic, that's over kill. I have every but one, so you at least have to have all but one.
Two: Your character realistically couldn't be 6'2" and 90 pounds, that's really, really thin. The average for someone that size is 150-200 pounds. I understand that you (probably) want to be thin, so I say you should be at least 115 pounds.
Three: Can you add a last name? This is not needed, but I think you should have one, but you don't have to.
But other than that, you're good
One: You cannot have every type of magic, that's over kill. I have every but one, so you at least have to have all but one.
Two: Your character realistically couldn't be 6'2" and 90 pounds, that's really, really thin. The average for someone that size is 150-200 pounds. I understand that you (probably) want to be thin, so I say you should be at least 115 pounds.
Three: Can you add a last name? This is not needed, but I think you should have one, but you don't have to.
But other than that, you're good
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
Edited.
Redd- Rank : Loner.
Lover : N/A, yet.
Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-06-09
Age : 24
Location : Alone.
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
105-107 plz?
Also, do you think you may end up making a gang? If you do I need to know so I can make it a usergroup.
Also (again), can you add one more fear?
Love the avatar BTW
Also, do you think you may end up making a gang? If you do I need to know so I can make it a usergroup.
Also (again), can you add one more fear?
Love the avatar BTW
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
Done. And yes, I think I will, if more people join. Call it the Rogue Wolves.
Redd- Rank : Loner.
Lover : N/A, yet.
Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-06-09
Age : 24
Location : Alone.
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
All right, adding it. You'll be the group mod. Also, you are responsible for making the ranks and all that other stuff.
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
Can the color be grey?
Redd- Rank : Loner.
Lover : N/A, yet.
Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-06-09
Age : 24
Location : Alone.
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
And... Done. There is ~Gang after it so people know its a gang. 'K?
Also....
APPROVED!!!
Also....
APPROVED!!!
Re: Redd Lyrus the Loner
Okay, Redd, I need you to send a request to join the Loners. That will change the color, I think.
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